A pretty day is u & me
In-
cluding
your smile: your laugh
gets me
moves me
touches me
as if with a flower
opening
blooming
multiplying
inside me
a bouquet
smelling sweet
I have in my hand
Making my day prettier
your smile,
produced/Growing stretching
across
continents connecting continents
warm as the sun on my brown skin
then hot fragrant with the scent
rising/
with the closed eyes
you see the me
that others fail to see
with the eyes opened;
you smell like my day
a pretty day
is u in the air around me
moving through me.
by Alexgeorge
I never know when a poem idea will occur. I'm always in the mood to write short stories; there's never a shortage of ideas, but if I sit down with the intention of composing a poem it will never come. I have to write poems when the inspiration hits me. The above poem came to me last night. At the gym. I was on a stationery bike, watching South Park. I had to get off the bike, get a pen and piece of paper from the front desk, write it up, and get back on the bike once it was written.
I edited it once I got home.
No, I'm not in love.
I'm in between loves,
just going by memory.
1 comment:
Wow. I don't know what else to say. This came to you while you were watching South Park? What was that episode about, and can I borrow this poem, and tell my girlfriend I wrote it?
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